Yeah, I'm not doing any more planes.

"Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire" (arch-duke-maxyenko)
03/04/2014 at 22:17 • Filed to: shoop

I'm not digging how it turned out, is this one better?

DISCUSSION (19)

Trunk Impaired 318 > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:22

It's still pretty damn good nonetheless

coqui70 > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:28

Try 2 things - different angle on the plane (say diving down diagonally) and remove the prop blades (or just draw the oval representing the blade tips).

MooseKnuckles > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:28

I like it, different angle and you may like it more? Maybe see how a Sopwith Camel turns out... hint.. hint.

ttyymmnn > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:32

A little work on the prop and you've got a winner. A simple grey oval would suffice, more than likely. Love those invasion stripes.

Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire > ttyymmnn
03/04/2014 at 22:34

But the grey oval would block out too much, I'll stick to cars me thinks.

ttyymmnn > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:38

Not a solid oval, just a thin line indicating the edge of the propeller disk. Or a yellow one. It will be obvious what it is. It's worth a try, methinks, then you can go back to cars.

All Motor Is Best Motor > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:54

Actually I love how this turned out. Nice!

Axial > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:56

Don't represent the prop with a ring but rather with the wedges you see when it's spinning. I think that would fit much better with this flat style.

Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire > ttyymmnn
03/04/2014 at 22:56

How about now?

Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire > Axial
03/04/2014 at 22:57

I had that, it was shit.

PushToStart > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 22:57

What, how do you not like how it turned out, it's awesome.

coqui70 > ttyymmnn
03/04/2014 at 22:59

Yep, thinner line on the oval and make sure the perspective matches - change the nose to point down so you can see the detail from the top.

ttyymmnn > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 23:04

Not bad, but the angles are off. The oval needs to be narrower, and it's tilting backwards a bit. It looks like the plane of the prop does not match the similar planes in the Mustang. Know what I mean? And I'm pretty sure the P-51 prop was much bigger than that. But I think you're on the right track. You might also see how it looks with nothing at all. Seriously, though, if you're happier doing cars, stick with what makes you happy.

Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire > ttyymmnn
03/04/2014 at 23:05

It's those details that make me stick to cars...

ttyymmnn > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 23:07

Just think about the prop disk being parallel to the wings, with the center of the disk back from the tip of the prop hub and you'll have it.

Axial > Arch Duke Maxyenko, Shit Talk Extraordinaire
03/04/2014 at 23:09

Did you try interrupting them across their longitudnal axis so they look like this:

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